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Kia ora Harry. I do like cats, I used to live with two of them. And when I was teaching at Wesley we had Ron the school cat. I like the similes you have used in your poem. Would you want to try making a Screencastify of you reading your poem?
Hi Harry.I love cats to,in fact their my favourite animal.i really enjoyed your poem(and thought it was so true!)maybe next time you can change the title because cats are not dumb. cheers daisy
Hi Harry its Milla from paroa school, yes I do like cats I live with two of them They always meow. I love how you used similes, are those really your cats? if they are they are really cute (but my cats wouldnt get along with them) And next time could you do differnt word to make them rhyme. Thanks Milla
Kia Ora Harry! I like the way you described what lazy dumb cats do! It reminds me wanting a cat when I was little. I like cats too! Could you maybe tell a story about what your cats did in the weekends? That would be great. Thanks! Nicole - New Windsor Primary School
Kia ora Harry. I do like cats, I used to live with two of them. And when I was teaching at Wesley we had Ron the school cat. I like the similes you have used in your poem. Would you want to try making a Screencastify of you reading your poem?
ReplyDeleteHi Harry.I love cats to,in fact their my favourite animal.i really enjoyed your poem(and thought it was so true!)maybe next time you can change the title because cats are not dumb.
ReplyDeletecheers daisy
in the corner it says they arent dumb look from harry
DeleteHi Harry its Milla from paroa school, yes I do like cats I live with two of them They always meow. I love how you used similes, are those really your cats? if they are they are really cute (but my cats wouldnt get along with them) And next time could you do differnt word to make them rhyme. Thanks Milla
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Harry! I like the way you described what lazy dumb cats do! It reminds me wanting a cat when I was little. I like cats too! Could you maybe tell a story about what your cats did in the weekends? That would be great. Thanks!
ReplyDeleteNicole - New Windsor Primary School