Hi guys, this is my "coin operated story". I hope you guys like it. What was your favourite part? blog ya later.
There's this kid called Billy and he's about 6 and he is walking with his mum then sees a Rocket ship. So he puts in his 50 cent piece. Then jumps in the rocket ship but it does not go to the moon. Billy is very disappointed so he continues to walk with his mum. Then he makes a lemonade stand and sells it to people that come around. Soon after days, after weeks, after months, after years he gets enough money. So Billy goes back to the rocket and dumps all of his coins in. Then gets in the rocket and presses the button but it does not take off then. Vroom! Then the rocket flies to the moon. Billy's screaming WoOoOoOoOoOoOoO! Finally he makes it to the moon. THE END
Hello Harry,I like you name for the kid.I think it is a good name because Billy sounds like a kids name.
ReplyDeletehow long did it take you to make the story?
blog you later
Vihaan